During my meeting with Olivia, I had her look at my introduction, my paragraph dealing with the UNE Core Handbook, and my conclusion. After looking at my introduction she had suggested that I reorganize it. Mainly to make sure it flows out perfectly. She had looked at my Core Handbook paragraph and recommended that I add evidence to it to support my ideas, rather than just stating the ideas show how my ideas are useful. Lastly, she went over my conclusion as I was having troubles with writing it. Her tips for it were very helpful as she mentioned I go back and look at my body paragraphs and give a sentence summary and essentially the conclusion will write itself.