I chose the second essay we did in class as my specific example of something I struggle with in my writing. This was my first draft of project 2 and I believe the main problem I had with writing this year was the organization of my paper. I would organize my paper but authors and not ideas, Cripps had pointed this out to me in this draft. He wanted me to have the layout of the paper by ideas and not authors to have the paper flow better. Which I did then revise to make sure my paper would flow and have the ideas line up with each other.