Recursive Process

The work I chose to present for the recursive process is my first draft of the essay I selected for my significant writing process. Looking at my first and final draft I can see the revisions I made right away. I would say I explained my quotes more to make sure the reader fully understood the point I was trying to get across. I also expanded my ideas to be able to make sure my point of view was clear to the reader. Not only did I expand my ideas, I also added other ideas in order to help the information I already had in the paper to be supported. Another type of revision I had made was making sure all of my intext citations were correct as well as making sure my quotes flowed with what I was talking about. In order to do so, I had to reorganize my paper in certain areas to make sure it all flowed smoothly. The revision allowed me make sure my paper was ready for a final draft. Completing the first draft and then revising it proved to me it was yet ready to be a final draft. Therefore, I am glad I was able to expand my ideas and further them to produce a better paper.