Introduction: The main change I made in my introduction was to my thesis statement. Instead of having my thesis be broad, I made it more clear and precise. I would say the change I made, made my view or perspective clearer in the sense that it was straight to the point rather than be open and not as precise. However, other than my thesis, I did not change anything in my introduction.

Evidence and Explanations: I did add some new evidence by making my trigger warnings paragraph into two separate paragraphs. I had to make it into two because I had enough evidence and explanations to make it two. When I say I added evidence, I am talking about another quote to back up my ideas and thoughts as well as my explanations on my points of view.

Reorganization: I do not believe I moved anything around, rather I expanded or made changes to a certain paragraph. I mentioned that paragraph above in my evidence and explanations portion of this blog post. I believe I did not move anything around, mainly because I felt confident in how I had my paper laid out.

New Paragraphs: I only have one new paragraph added and that was because I split my trigger warnings ideology. I believe they improved my paper because it allowed me to separate my two ideas of trigger warnings. I was able to fully explain both of my point of views on trigger warnings rather than having it be on big paragraph with two different ideas in the paragraph.