When I met with Olivia, I had her look over my trigger warning essay that I made into two paragraphs. I also had her look at my quotes to see if they were well explained and made sure people would understand them. After that I had her look over my introduction and conclusion. Olivia had told me that most of the things I had her look over, she did not have a comment for, she believed it was very well written. The only comment she had gave me was about my conclusion and was to be more precise in wrapping up my essay. Other than that, she did not have any other changes for me to make. I appreciated her time, as it gave me another set of eyes to look at my paper.